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[Cold Hands # 2]

Nice enough

I wish you had turned the sound effects on the ocean down a little lower.

I think you're developing your abilities.

Foxcato responds:

Thanks for the review. Working with sound FX is something I've never really done before, so this was a valuable experience.

[SRM Transformers 2!]

Just my suggestions: Take them or leave 'em

I think you've done all the "break the fourth wall" jokes you can get out of this series. I feel you should start exploring new territory.

Also, while you might consider the new voices an integral part of the new designs and characters, I think it might be a little cooler if they sounded like the original characters. To that end, it might be a long shot, but perhaps you should contact DRSMOOV on youtube.com. The dubbing on his mashups is very raunchy, but he does have a bit of popularity and his characters do sound a bit like the original Gen 1 guys. Maybe if you collaborated, you could come up with a great third episode.

Battosai810 responds:

Your suggestions have been duly noted - the thing is, my characters in this little series are actually dressed up versions of my regular characters. SRM is SRM Prime, Cousin Mel is Melatron, etc. and I want to keep at least some ties to my regular cartoons (SRM Transformers, as popular as it is, isn't my only series) and I generally like to keep my humor pretty clean, at least on NG. As for breaking the fourth wall, I do that when it fits; most of the ones in this were references to the first toon.
But thanks a lot for your suggestions, I just might have to contact that guy.

[Breast Cancer Awareness]

Men can and do get breast cancer

It's like 1 in every 100,000 men do. (According To Wikipedia)

Any way, I liked this.

IrrIsponsible responds:

Shit! I'm 1 in every 100,000 men!

[(2007) Stomach Ache]

Laughed Four Times- Not Quite enough

This and "Sneaky, Sneaky" are all the evidence you need that Knox is flailing about like a fish out of water as far as his klaymen are concerned, and that he should just let the series die a more dignified death than slowly letting each movie get less and less amusing. I am typing this in the hope that he doesn't make another one after this worth only a 4 or 5 and devotes his energies to more entertaining projects.

Knox responds:

im making 800 more!